Li’ve Progress

I broke 51,000 words yesterday. I wrote a very long chapter about Kita interacting with the Djinn. They’re always a lot of fun, kind of the antithesis of Kita, and now she’s working with them.

I didn’t do much today other than think of ideas. I have several I’m thinking about. One is a romance between Stormy and Toxic. It seems like an odd couple, but I think it’ll work. Actually, I know it’ll work I wrote a short story that takes place after Li’ve where they work together to defeat an old enemy. So, look for that to come out soon. I also have the storyline of a transgender pilot that has come into Kita’s orbit. I’m not sure where I’m going with her. An idea was she might be a good match for Sheppard. If Sheppard could hold still long enough and not be in command of something. Kita and Kylee butted heads and Kita punished her. That storyline hasn’t gone anywhere other than Kylee sulking about. Kita’s just been too busy to deal with her.

Other news, Birthright took second place, again, in Seb Jenkins monthly Elimination Awards. I also received a lengthy review from MikleoKrein for Return of the Fallen Angel: Book 1. It’s mixed. He loves the story, world-building, and action scenes. His biggest problem was he just couldn’t connect with Kita. And I get that, you either love her or hate her. I think my favorite comment is Kita’s personality isn’t complex enough. If your interested in reading it or sharing your thoughts you can see it in the comments section here –> https://goo.gl/sD4akg

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Li’ve progress

So, I got this idea to post progress updates on Li’ve after watching a Netflix show iZombie where a character talks about live-tweeting his screenplay. I’m not quite sure I know what that means, but I liked the idea of giving you, the fans, a glimpse of the creative process and get some behinds the scenes looks at what will happen in the upcoming book. I’d also love to hear your feedback as I go along.

Currently, I am forty-six thousand words into Li’ve. I was writing earlier this year and stopped because…call it writer’s block. Mostly I just wasn’t feeling it, so I went to work on other stories in the series, namely Sarin’s War, but I was also sending out Birthright and Rebirth to potential publishers. Nothing yet, if you’re wondering, but Birthright is out at two as of right now.

I just started writing Li’ve a few days ago after some ideas came to me. I no longer write like I use to. Sitting in front of the computer and hammering out the story by the hour. It was a time of constant free flow of ideas and dialog. That all came to a halt about halfway through Clouds. I got to a point, hit a wall, and hated what I wrote, so I threw it out and rewrote the entire book. Since then, I have to spend time thinking about the story and then writing it, bit by bit. It now comes out in 1000 word chunks or around that. Good days I might do 2500. Today I knocked out 1660.

I have no idea how long Li’ve will be. I thought it might be sixty thousand words, but with what I have to cover that seems too short. I’m thinking it’ll be closer to eighty thousand. If I really get some ideas it might hit a hundred thousand, but that seems on the outside. The story hasn’t even gotten to Earth yet or linked up with Sarin and the events of Sarin’s War. So there’s a lot left to write.

Today was an interesting problem. Everyone knows Kita likes to torture people. The problem for me is keeping it fresh and inventive. She’s done a lot of slicing, dicing, and burning. Today she needed to get information from a new character Sahara. The trick today wasn’t about causing pain, but playing on fear and not of fear of pain. Something just as primal. Confined spaces. Most spacefaring races are used to cramped conditions. Some even have fear of being outdoors under a sky. But, I took it to an extreme, a coffin. Barely enough room to move your hands and not enough room to turn over. Now, shoot the coffin into space and I think you have a truly terrifying experience. Do you run out of air first or freeze to death? Kita gives Sahara a radio and tells her she has ten minutes before she’ll be out of range.

I’m writing this next part as kind of a note to myself, but someone might ask it. This method doesn’t produce blood or anything else Kita likes. She could have easily used the truth serum to get what she wants. Tina most likely will bring this up. And the ready answer is Sahara is a Djinn, so the serum doesn’t work on her. It’s another interesting wrinkle of adding the alien races, old tricks don’t always work. It’s taken Kita a while to figure out how to give wings to the other races.

I try and write every day, though on my wife’s days off I usually don’t get to and I’m discovering kids take up a lot of time and space. But, check back often and click the subscribe button to get notified when I do post an update.

How to Write an Action Scene: Part 1

I decided to write this post for four reasons. The first was a friend of mine, Mark Gardner, asked me to write an action scene for his upcoming book, War of the Worlds: Firestorm. This was a completely different kind of action scene than I’ve ever written. A Martian, Think the aliens in the Simpsons, must escape a burning laboratory while out running a deadly gas. His shape, size, and lack of abilities made him a unique challenge.

As for the second reason, I’ve been shopping my own book Birthright around and I’ve found I’m a thousand words short of publisher’s requirement of eighty thousand words. I didn’t want to go back and add fluff, because I’ve worked so hard to take it out. Instead, I looked at my plot and realized there was no action scene at the end of the book to showcase my main character Kita’s new augmentations and abilities.

Thirdly, I love action scenes. Anytime someone asks me how to improve their books I tell them to put a dragon in it or at least the equivalent. I did it in Birthright. Dinosaurs count as dragons, right? I subscribe to the J.J. Abrams school of thought, go big or go home. Unlike Abrams, I do have my action sequences make sense and be believable to the reader.

Lastly, I did a little research on this subject and found that all the blog posts about writing action scenes are nothing but silly rules that don’t tell you anything about writing an action scene. I’ve come up with a list of things that will help you write a killer action scene: environment, characters, drama, and the goal. Today I’m going to talk environment and characters.

The environment. This is where your action scene takes place. An action scene can take place anywhere. What you have to do as an author is to arrange and populate the space with things that can be used to maximize the scene. For example, in WotW: Firestorm the main scene took place in a laboratory. I populated it with glassware, lab equipment, and workbenches—what you’d expect to find in a lab, but all these things are used to create the action scene. Here’s an example:

Climbing onto the nearest workbench, it was covered in something wet. Let’s hope it’s not toxic, he thought with a shuddering of his tentacles. Steve climbed across the workbench to the edge. It was over a meter and half. Below him on the floor was a pile of burning lab equipment that had caught the workbench and floor on fire.

Steve stood up on the tips of his tentacles, and rocked back and forth. When he was moving forward he jumped, landing in the middle of the next workbench. He signed in relief, but he couldn’t relax. The end of the next workbench was engulfed in flame. The open end had a set of glassware taking up most of the space.

Around Steve the roar of the fire continued, urging him onward. The sarin gas could arrive at any moment. He set himself up for his next jump, hoping to land in front of the glassware set.

Steve jumped, but overshot his target. He crashed into the glassware, crushing some underneath him and sending the rest to the floor. He snarled over the pain of several shards of glass penetrating his tentacles. I cannot worry about superficial injuries, he thought, I must get out of here.

You can see the environment at work here and how it’s shaping the action sequence. The more you give yourself to work with, the more imaginative you can be. But, don’t put something in the scene that doesn’t belong, unless you have a good explanation how it got there and have established it beforehand. Ex Machina is something the movies love, but as an author, you want to avoid it at all cost. For everything, there is a reason.

So now that we have a place for our action scene, let’s talk about characters. In WotW: Firestorm Martians aren’t the most agile, but does have long tentacles that give them reach. Steve the Martian is in stark contrast to my character, Kita. She is an Olympic gold medal caliber gymnast and a master with the sword. Their action sequences are going to be very different. If I put Kita in the lab from WOTW: Firestorm, she would have had no problem making it from one side to the other. There wouldn’t be much drama there. Look at your character’s skills and abilities and plan your action scenes to challenge these. If you make it too difficult the character is going to die, too easy and your reader will lose interest. The reader is going to know what your character is capable of. If your character has never handled a gun before, nothing ruins the action scene more than your character picking up a gun and being a crack shot with it. It just doesn’t happen in real life. Now, if they picked it and failed to hit anything, not only is that believable but helps elevate the drama which I’ll cover next time.

That’s it for today. Next time we’ll cover drama and goals.